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Reverb: Epilogue
Reverb is finished.
I completed and posted the Epilogue last week; I also did a very minor revision to the end of what used to be Chapter 15, the last chapter. Chapter 15 is now chapters 15 and 16, because the friggin' thing really was waay too long to be a single chapter.
For those who dislike WIPs and are eyeing me askance, muttering 'you said it was finished last time!!': nothing significant happened in the Epilogue; the plot really did wind up in the final chapter. The epilogue is, in fact, entirely gratuitous. But epilogues are fun, and there's nothing really wrong with 'gratuitous', is there?
Epilogue teaser:
One of these days, AnnaRose was going to hit another growth spurt, and get too big to ride on MacGyver’s shoulders. Till then, he was going to make the most of every opportunity, even though it was awkward going under the trees up to the helicopter landing field near the cabin. She was good at ducking, but it often meant her grip slipped from his forehead. It had quickly turned into a game: when she grabbed his ears, he’d start singing off-key, and when her hands covered his eyes, he’d exclaim “Wow! When did it get so dark?” and start to wander off the path.
The epilogue (appearing as chapter 17) is posted here, and the story actually starts here.
'Beth
October 2010
I completed and posted the Epilogue last week; I also did a very minor revision to the end of what used to be Chapter 15, the last chapter. Chapter 15 is now chapters 15 and 16, because the friggin' thing really was waay too long to be a single chapter.
For those who dislike WIPs and are eyeing me askance, muttering 'you said it was finished last time!!': nothing significant happened in the Epilogue; the plot really did wind up in the final chapter. The epilogue is, in fact, entirely gratuitous. But epilogues are fun, and there's nothing really wrong with 'gratuitous', is there?
Epilogue teaser:
Reverb
Future Imperfect
~ a gratuitous epilogue ~
Future Imperfect
~ a gratuitous epilogue ~
One of these days, AnnaRose was going to hit another growth spurt, and get too big to ride on MacGyver’s shoulders. Till then, he was going to make the most of every opportunity, even though it was awkward going under the trees up to the helicopter landing field near the cabin. She was good at ducking, but it often meant her grip slipped from his forehead. It had quickly turned into a game: when she grabbed his ears, he’d start singing off-key, and when her hands covered his eyes, he’d exclaim “Wow! When did it get so dark?” and start to wander off the path.
The epilogue (appearing as chapter 17) is posted here, and the story actually starts here.
'Beth
October 2010
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I adore how you've completed Nikki - there really is no other word for it.
And hey, you fulfilled that old Russian psychic guy's premonition. :P