Oh, wait a minute . . . I just found the avocado pages, with the rewrite of that scene . . . let's see, the Space Vet and the Colonel both catch the Space-Feline virus from the Crazy Cat Lady, and the only way to treat the fever is for them to tear each other's clothes off. Then they're all too cold and they have to jump into bed. And there's only one bed, but that's all right, it's cable.
Damn. I'm missing the last two pages. I think it was rewritten again, after the Space Vets' Guild objected to having yet another hot babe killed off -- do you have the tangerine pages?
Why do crazee-spacebabes always have some weird kind of virus? Why can't it be that the lusty Col. is the one with the disease? Like the one he has that infects all women with a flaming desire to lick his eyebrow scar?
*shuffles through the tangerine pages and produces a pencil* Mebbe I'll just add a scene or two myself...
Oh,. dang, you're right . . . *consults mango pages* Here it is. The Colonel has the virus, and the Crazy Cat Lady and the Space Vet both get infected. The rest of the scene proceeds along the lines of the previous version.
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Damn. I'm missing the last two pages. I think it was rewritten again, after the Space Vets' Guild objected to having yet another hot babe killed off -- do you have the tangerine pages?
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*shuffles through the tangerine pages and produces a pencil* Mebbe I'll just add a scene or two myself...
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